Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Fifty Four . . .
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You are my Heart
by Stormcat

You are the most important person ever to enter my life.
Any thought of you simply fills me with joy.
I fall asleep thinking your name,
wake to your realization, exist for your happiness.

You are time to my clock, the wind to my sail
the shout to my triumph, fear to my pale
the pond to my lily, night to my moon

brook to my babble, the sky to my blue
the sea to my wave crash, cane to my sweet
soul to my music, and the heart to my beat


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19 comments:

  1. SusanFebruary 12, 2014 at 9:40 AM

    This is Pure Beauty. Thank you. I have a couple of tears myself.
    Where will you be reading this poem tonight? Let us know over at Poets United--at least the general area of the country.

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  2. Jae RoseFebruary 12, 2014 at 10:00 AM

    Some pairs are a triumph..and make everything so much better..far better than lingering old blokes!

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  3. Kathryn DycheFebruary 12, 2014 at 10:29 AM

    I simply love the pairings, so beautiful.

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  4. rallentandaFebruary 12, 2014 at 10:51 AM

    I think you are in love:) Enjoy!

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 12, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    This is beautiful. The heart lifts with every line, especially when you start listing delights, like "the pond to my lily"....and "night to my moon". It begins to babble happily like the brook in the last stanza......I totally loved this.

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  6. UnknownFebruary 12, 2014 at 12:06 PM

    I love these descriptions, especially "You are time to my clock" and "sky to my blue".

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  7. alan1704February 12, 2014 at 1:23 PM

    This really works and the flow of words is a stream of affection. Well done.

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  8. Sumana RoyFebruary 12, 2014 at 1:41 PM

    lovely pairings ...the vitality is so tangible...

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  9. Laurie KolpFebruary 12, 2014 at 2:42 PM

    Such a beautiful love poem... I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day!

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  10. UnknownFebruary 12, 2014 at 5:44 PM

    What a wonderful love poem. Who wouldn't want these words spoken or written to and about them?

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 5:50 PM

    now that's romantic! ~

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  12. kaykualaFebruary 12, 2014 at 7:35 PM

    Giving and getting everything that one can ask for. Very refreshing SC!

    Hank

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  13. Jennifer WagnerFebruary 12, 2014 at 11:04 PM

    I really like "brook to my babble"! Very nice love poem.

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  14. MaryFebruary 13, 2014 at 10:34 AM

    Just lovely. I especially like 'heart to my beat.' Seems you will be having a happy Valentine's Day. Smiles.

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  15. ScarletFebruary 13, 2014 at 1:37 PM

    Goodness this is so romantic, sigh ~ Beautifully written ~

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  16. Donna SmithFebruary 13, 2014 at 1:47 PM

    Oh, so sweetly put. "Sky to my blue" I just love.

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  17. aspiritofsimplicityFebruary 13, 2014 at 7:57 PM

    so sweet....i like brook to my babble and cane to my sweet

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  18. moondustwriterFebruary 13, 2014 at 9:22 PM

    "Night to my moon" (of course) I think it's all the little things that make a heart sing. beautiful Stormcat!

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  19. PanchaliFebruary 14, 2014 at 4:14 AM

    .."brook to my babble, the sky to my blue
    the sea to my wave crash, cane to my sweet
    soul to my music, and the heart to my bea"....aha, delightful lines, stretches readers imaginations, Stormcat.

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