on the eve of the Western New Year
Quiet Anger
By Stormcat
there's the kind that kills
that
that's held
inside the kind that
builds eventually
the person
is seething behind
a smile the kind
that release is
inevitable hope
you don't hurt someone
else when it
happens
hope too you survive it
there's the kind that helps
that that's
righteous
indignation stimulated
by inequality
ineptitude
inefficiency . . . stupidity
it boils out
focused on that iniquity . . .
focused on
righting
attacking the whole
righting the
wrong
changing something for all
so is quiet anger
strength or
weakness
fight what
tolerate what
ignore what
engage what
justify tolerance as weakness
condemn rebellion
as treason
egregious acts aside
world issues are
superfluous
If I were a better man
I wouldn't feel
so angry
I'd be more understanding
of life and all
its complexities
I'd know when to rail
against the
status quo
I'd never let anger
get the best
I'd never even have
anger
much less keep it quiet
Ha
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Powerful with just the right amount of rebellion
ReplyDeleteliked the format and the theme of expressing rebellion to a point... we all have these moments .. it is what we do with them that leaves a mark...
ReplyDeleteThis format has been an ongoing interest for me. Ways to make two poems into one, ways to make one poem into two, ways to make infinite numbers of combinations where each makes sense and has meaningful content. This was my first attempt, actually. Try reading the poem eliminating either the right or left. It's like three poems in one!
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