tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post1710416718468218698..comments2023-10-20T08:07:31.056-04:00Comments on Stormcat's Poetry: Stormcat Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-54726791222314750982014-09-09T07:20:59.223-04:002014-09-09T07:20:59.223-04:00A very wonderful poem.A very wonderful poem.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-86578748975956536732014-09-08T10:32:39.004-04:002014-09-08T10:32:39.004-04:00i love the form of this poem. and the long sentenc...i love the form of this poem. and the long sentences give the effect of the long distances the hawk has flown. and i really like how you break up the last line at the end of the poem. dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-3735242743873127292014-09-08T10:31:21.794-04:002014-09-08T10:31:21.794-04:00Your description is full of rich detail. You have ...Your description is full of rich detail. You have captured the majesty of the birds.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-56439042920906439282014-09-08T10:21:02.524-04:002014-09-08T10:21:02.524-04:00This is beautiful. I love how you write of the wi...This is beautiful. I love how you write of the wind, the hawk and ultimately freedom to be. I enjoyed reading this so much.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-41575507267909094392014-09-07T22:12:05.155-04:002014-09-07T22:12:05.155-04:00To soar with the strength of the hawk is the ultim...To soar with the strength of the hawk is the ultimate freedom. The muse inspiring him to freedom excellence and power charged creativity...but like Icarus must be mindful not to fly too close to the sun.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-58990215750902776792014-09-07T21:05:50.475-04:002014-09-07T21:05:50.475-04:00I love to see the hawk circling overhead and hear ...I love to see the hawk circling overhead and hear it's screech - once it must have gotten too close to a nest and it was interesting to see the two small birds dip and badger it away from the nest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-38285798500496472822014-09-07T19:30:24.089-04:002014-09-07T19:30:24.089-04:00What a lovely invocation of the hawk spirit and c...What a lovely invocation of the hawk spirit and channeling their energies with yours as you embark on your journey ~ I sense a bit of native myth in your verses M ~ You were spot on with your comments in my blog ~ Wishing you happy week ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-17937607313321174822014-09-07T19:03:12.055-04:002014-09-07T19:03:12.055-04:00Beautiful portrait of hawks. I don't normally ...Beautiful portrait of hawks. I don't normally like hawks because they eat my chickens. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-40265188705591712812014-09-07T18:04:08.303-04:002014-09-07T18:04:08.303-04:00What a joy it would be to soar with the hawks!What a joy it would be to soar with the hawks!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-30895214176199509922014-09-07T14:17:44.730-04:002014-09-07T14:17:44.730-04:00Great soaring and settling piece!
ZQGreat soaring and settling piece!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-31892093662073215722014-09-07T13:33:24.329-04:002014-09-07T13:33:24.329-04:00true song of the wind.. to feel that freedom, to l...true song of the wind.. to feel that freedom, to live that... beautiful.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-42856190041313885552014-09-07T13:17:21.309-04:002014-09-07T13:17:21.309-04:00How I adore the hawks in this poem - riding the wi...How I adore the hawks in this poem - riding the wind, "feeling the joy and the pain of the well traveled truth", bearing "his heart upon their wings", as he longs for the love that will lift him up "to join those hawks soaring on the true song of the wind." Very beautiful. May it be just as you have written it!<br />Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-30544349976379259032014-09-07T12:45:27.528-04:002014-09-07T12:45:27.528-04:00one of the things i always hoped since a kid was t...one of the things i always hoped since a kid was to fly...not as superman, but as a hawk...to feel the wind and the muscles move together...to know the wind such...would be a powerful feeling...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-18500608678610801162014-09-07T11:55:48.888-04:002014-09-07T11:55:48.888-04:00"hawks know the wind well," reads like a..."hawks know the wind well," reads like an adage...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3359380955672235923.post-56693953572223363972014-09-07T11:22:41.422-04:002014-09-07T11:22:41.422-04:00To have a hawk as totem.. What a beautiful image y...To have a hawk as totem.. What a beautiful image you create of how they soar the sky above.. There is a sense of freedom in a flight like that.. A sense of dread for its prey though.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com